Fresh Eyes;

A technique our english teacher has taught us to use when writing a good essay has become helpful for our media production. After having two and a half weeks off college we return to the editing stages and noticed that some of our piece should be changed.
Some of my opinions were:

• The shot of the car foiled by a green used effect looks out of place
• The establishing shot is a tad short due to the music I want to mix with it
• Phone needs doing ASAP to start pulling the full effect on the piece
• First aid shot is a bit long at the beginning and looks staged
• Cut the final shot into two first being slow and second being fast to circle back to first shot

After much dicussion our group decided:

• More footage is needed
• Cloud shot- quicker
• Longer establishing shot
• Maybe experiment with some handheld shots
• Refilm the blink shot which has an error on
• Phone call needs to be realistic therefore a male shall ring and a woman will answer
• Last shot is wobbly